All this started one day before Christmas ! My dad was out and my mom shopping for presents and a Christmas tree , my brother building a robot in his room .I was board and it was snowing outside so I didn't want to play outside ! So, I sat in the house and thought what I could do ! After a while I took out my old decoration stuff and started to use sticky tape & started to stick the ribbons around the house . By the time I was done my mom was back ! You , should have looked at her , she was so surprised , At once she came and hugged me. Because of all the jumping , my brother came down to take a look what was happening ! So back to the story , my mom started to put up the Christmas tree and my brother and me started to decorate it! Around 6 in the evening my dad came home with a big bag and wouldn't show me what was in it !
The next morning in my excitement I got up early and got ready to go outside ! By 2 my dad left the house , telling us that he had a meeting ! We went to the club house and had a little party before Santa came to give us gifts !
After a while Santa had given all the kids the gifts ! Just then I noticed Santa's voice , it just sounded like my dad ! Immediately I ran and hugged him before he got up ! My mom pushed my brother to get into the photo! I still have the photo hanging on my wall! This is my most greatest Christmas ever !
It is good but try not to use too much exclaimation mark and check your grammar. Good work! Well done!
ReplyDeleteGood job Anjana!!! Try not to make mistakes.
ReplyDeleteHi Anjana (:
ReplyDeleteIts "bored" , not "board" . You used a little too much exclaimation marks , but good job.